Thursday, 17 December 2015
Friday, 11 December 2015
Feedback - 11 Dec
Clara,
excellent work all round. Clearly, all your research and planning work to date fits easily into the top grade boundary and should you maintain this, there is nothing stopping you achieving nearly full marks for the research and planning work.
One thing - I have added a comment on your initial ideas statement about adding images... have a look as this will improve it this post considerably.
There are still a few posts missing - main task questionnaire and analysis is the main research post, and there are a few planning posts missing. Check your tick list and make sure you complete any missing posts over the Xmas holidays. Well done - excellent work so far! Keep it up!
Carl.
excellent work all round. Clearly, all your research and planning work to date fits easily into the top grade boundary and should you maintain this, there is nothing stopping you achieving nearly full marks for the research and planning work.
One thing - I have added a comment on your initial ideas statement about adding images... have a look as this will improve it this post considerably.
There are still a few posts missing - main task questionnaire and analysis is the main research post, and there are a few planning posts missing. Check your tick list and make sure you complete any missing posts over the Xmas holidays. Well done - excellent work so far! Keep it up!
Carl.
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